a) excessive amounts of leather and "shit kickers"...
b) out of date (per when the book was first published) references to various rap artists in an attempt to make the Brothers look "hardcore" and "edgy"...
c) annoying usage of phrases like "my female" and "my mate" and other possessive catch phrases...
d) a rather rape-y almost sexy bit towards the end of the novel...
e) the sharp parallels to Sherrilyn Kenyon characters...
.....it was still a better love story than Twilight.